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June 3rd, 2008, 9:25 am

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Reply shadow lover, June 3rd, 2008, 9:29 am

its alright but i would like to see speech bubbles!!!!

Reply dr mercha, June 3rd, 2008, 10:43 am

oh come on!
you deleted my comment!
it could have helped you!
sorry if i was being mean but thats just how it is.

Reply Mitani, June 8th, 2008, 7:13 pm

Hmm yes, speech bubbles would help because the text is difficult to read over the BG... also could you tone down the BG a bit? it kinda absorbs your characters a bit (and text)

Reply LimesWorper, June 9th, 2008, 5:13 pm

I assume that Sonic's line is meant to be read first, but no-one is going to do that by the way you posistioned the text. And that same Nazo sprite is used again...I hope it's not in the next strip too. Another problem is re-using that same background. Have them change location at least once! Another small problem in this is that Nazo is going round the front of that piller even though it's infront of the ground they were standing on. seems odd for him to go out and around it when he doesn't have to.

And a bigger problem I'd forgotten to mention. 1-panel comic strips are BAD. Please try at least 4 panel ones in the future. You have so much space here that's just empty, it could easily be used for more panels, or at least some more going-ons.

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